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Friday 22 June 2012

Rose's life.

One day a girl called Rose (she was magic but was brought up in a normal world) was making notes for her mother and father. She hoped for  them to see her notes but she used powerful, dark magic and she didn't know it was very dangerous to do stuff like that in a world without magic. Later on that day she ran away, far, far away.

"I know you're verry upset because we are moving, but it is a wonderful place," yelled dad, he was having a wander around our new house. All I done was stand on the doorstep hoping he would find out that I don't like our  new house! I'm 10 years old and I hate moving only because I loved my flat, well atleast I have my pet dog with me to make me happy.
"Dad I'm right behind you," I lied.
"I know where you are!" Dad shouted, but I don't think he was playing a game. He came to the doorstep and gave me a big box rapped up with wrapping paper. I snatched it off him not saying thank you, he sighed. I oppened it quickly pretending I don't care if it is for me or if it's for someone in Australia (on the other side of the world). But at the end I did care because it was one of those metal detectors. I couldn't lie after that so I gave dad a big hug and to our new garden and started using it!

I searched and searched, wondering if there were gold of a billion pounds or even a letter from years ago. Then finally my metal detector went BEEP BEEP! Like a car. I digged and digged for about an hour and I would have to say that I digged for atlest 5 meaters. Maybe dad baught me a metal detector from poundland or the 99p shop. But after digging a bit  more I found a note and read it out loud, "athe azzen take me to Rose enton peckysh." I got all dizzy and fell right to the ground.

When I woke up I saw a tall man inside a small cotage with a lady holding a baby. The baby had turned a beatiful pink glittering rose into a dull midnight black rose. I couldn't hear them talking but I saw their mouthes move up and down. The man was wearing a victorian brown coat that came down to his waste, he was holding a wooden walking stick for the sake of it, a white top with black buttons, his trousers were black and his hair was split up with curves on each end. The lady holding the baby was wearing a long brown dress that dropped to the floor, she was wearing an apron that was white, her hair was long and black. The baby was cute and chubby, it looked like a new born, wrapped up in a dirty, long cloth.The lady and the man walked outside to a river, they got a basket and put the baby in the basket. They put the basket on the river and waved goodbye.

I stood still but I was following the basket, when a lady with a long white dress (as white as  snow) took the basket into a great big old fashioned house. She put a spell on the baby, I could tell because she was mumbleing. Then suddenly everything changed around and the baby was left on a doorstep of a foster home called, Millie's sunny foster home! It was all in the colours of the rainbow.  A lady opened the front door and took the baby.

Then time ast and the baby was no longer a baby, she looked about 7 years old with short curly brown hair. She wrote her name on one peace of paper, Rose, colourful and happy.

"why are you righting your name down on a peace of paper?" Asked louis sitting beside Rose. Rose didn't say anything she just walked off not even responding. Louis hated Rose and Rose hated louis! Rose looked at louis walking up to Millie. "Rose is ignooring me and she gave me the evils which made me very upset!" Said louis fake crying. Rose ran up to Millie.
"I didn't ignore her and I didn't give her the evils all I did was nothing," explaned Rose.
"Then why is poor louis crying," said Millie looking Rose in the eye!
"I didn't here anyone talk to me and when I saw her walking to you all I did was smile," lied Rose. Rose ran away and started crying, she was really sensitive.
"Don't cry..........Oh you naughty girl lois you always fake cry don't you, I will have a word with you after I sort Rose out!" Shouted Millie. Rose went to a corner in the basement where she always go's whenever she was upset.

Poor girl I thought to myself. I hate that girl who got Rose upset. I was still stuck watching Rose's story. Rose was so cute and sweet and a happy and cheerful girl. I liked watching this story it is sweet.

At lunchtime Rose was all by herself because none of the other kids wanted to sit neer her. But louis came up.
"ooh look, Little Miss Get Me Told Off," said lous really Andgryily.
"Leave me alone, please," said Rose peacefully.
"OK.........Miss perfect happy girl," replyed louis.

I wondered what was happening. I could see Rose in a beatiful garden, bright green grass, paintings on the fences oround the garden. Rose was sitting on the green gloomy grass righting notes. I suddenly heared noise and I could see dad. I saw mum back from our old house.

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